ok so....
I will start on a positive note
you used all real instruments thats something not commonly seen on this web sight altho not as rare as i make it sound not common either any ways props for that! the song structure was pretty good as well
now on to other pressing matters
i absolutely hated your guitar tone....... no offense its personal preference always heads to the composer but it sounded like it was being muffled thru a pillow and then being amplified by a trashcan, all in all it dosent have a good tone
the bass as mentioned before is to loud
and the drums need more volume epically the kick.
Back to a positive note i liked how it was funky and fun to listen to maybe ad some keyboards to give it more life and switch up the effects on the guitar, all in all i dug it you just need to make it more audible for the listener!