lol- sounds like soil........
yep soil i hit the nail on the head.... i dont like soil or really this kinda pop like metal... but as far as the song my bias aside it is a pretty solid peice, i just it would have been more varied other than the little breakdown at 2:49 when your useing the broken chords-Picking...... but its nothing new unfortantly but all in all you have a pretty solid (cookie cutter) but solid non the less...... any ways thats just my input, maby go out on a limb alittle bit in stead of haveing a boreing drum pattern why not have some tom grooves during the breakdown instead of just hi-hats be creative with it, cus a key part of writeing a song is haveing every instrument be involving and not just have 1 stand out! thats my input! :) i hope its constructive.